@TherealCdubs138
Feedback: the 3rd level (treadmill blocks) is super hard to get past because the blocks move you too fast and they are too far apart. This is ok, except it is the 3rd level, right at the beginning. I would suggest to either make it easier or put it farther along in the obby. Edit: I know some people may think this is very easy to get past, but I am just saying this for people who are not good at Roblox obbys because it is right at the beginning. Edit 2: why is this comment so popular? I am giving feedback to the dev XD. Apparently there is a comment war or something.
@Seaitees
Feedback: this game could take hours upon hours to complete, as if you die on the last level, there's about a 50% chance for your corpse to slide off and land on a checkpoint below the level, forcing you to do half the Obby again.
@STICKER444
0:12 DEMON MUST LOREL, DEMON MUST LOREL, DEMON MUST LOREL
@kawai1_pawzz
idk if this would help for future games like this, but if you want the bot/person to sound more real, i recommend making them act more and more distressed as they progress on in the story/obby, begging the player to stop playing. another thing, you could try making the player freeze for a few seconds when they start getting near the end as if the bot is actively trying to stop them (and like the player had to spam certain keys to break free and continue), and if they player actually finishes, you could try and make the bot getting deleted as they finish the game, as well as the world around them as the bot cry's out for help in a distorted voice, leaving the player in a dark, empty space with faint music in the background, white text slowly fading onto the screen saying smth like: "Congratuations!!1!!!11 you beat the obby!" idk lol, i love psychological horror games and just though that maybe i could help give you some ideas for some future games :) (not hating, this is genuinlly really cool, i could not code to save my life- amazing game đź‘Ťđź‘Ťđź‘Ťđź‘Ť) edit: i recommend playing Doki Doki Literature Club if you want a feel of a genuinely fucking terrifying phycological horror game (or watch a break down of how its such a successful horror game)
@Grufan-peak
Ngl this is... kinda cool. Something I've always wanted to make, but in Retro style. This actually inspired me to finally try and make one. Thanks.
@THEego_man
There's a different ending to it: if you're on the final dialogue where he tells you not to go to the light, and you jump off instead, a dialogue pops up saying "Aw shucks, better luck next time!" and you get kicked with the message "Connection Error"
@radical_enigmatical1200
I actually managed to complete the obby and it was really REALLY difficult. It feels like a huge accomplishment, the hardest level (for me) was level nine and I died at least sixty times, but I really liked the obby! Being picky, I wasn’t a big fan of the story, but you made the obby hard but completable. Make more obbies and stories in the future, man!! I’m looking forward to it :)
@c00lkidd.2
yo, i played your game 7 months ago and it was cool! I didn't know you created this lol
@Ashleycolorful
I really like you're voice! It's calm, It's quiet, Has a nice pitch to it, And it's very fitting for such videos!
@penguinroyal
Feedback: I was in Level 10 (Lava Hill) already, with the Creator saying "This is your last chance", and I got hit by the lava block while on the way to the end. Somehow I think my decapitated head hit the checkpoint in Level 4 (Boulder Ladder) and I now keep getting reset back into Level 4. I spent all my patience in that ice tightrope, so man it feels like such a waste doing all that. No way I'm doing that all over again lmao. Still nice concept
@lhama456
Feedback: the ice tightrope part was really really bad, and when i made it to the next level i died and one of my body parts hit the spawn and i respawned back to the beggining... Also you could make The Creator be a little bit more subtle, he gets angry way too easily so it's not really much of a surprise. Still, his face when he says ''This is your last chance'' really scared me. Good job, just fix the small bugs and it's going to be great
@werrts
this could actually become a good game if there was a chance where the player gets teleported to another place as they progress through the obby, and have some more lore about how the creator was trapped in the game and stuff like it
@Geraldandme
2:32 “Welcome to my totally not impossible obby! Balls.”
@browni.playzroblox
2:58 helo, my name is TheLoreOfRarw :D
@BakedRobloxOfficial
When I got to the ice Part it was impossible. I kept sliding off, even if I made the smallest movement you should at least make it so it doesn’t slide you off as much or make it a little bit bigger
@melissapope5149
suggestion: add dialogue that says that you're dying so much so ppl that stumbled across the game without watching lore can understand and it actually has that feel of not one thing or person with you.
@germanmatosas1373
A Stereotypical Obby but made by Pluto.
@BlueCrystalAnimatez
I got this video recommended earlier, then, later today, I felt like playing an obby and so I searched and yours came up. As soon as things started getting weirder, I made the connection, I seriously love the game, it's so cool!
@Milliee_x3
Im def gonna try this game out, it looks rly good (also tysm for the jumpscare warning)
@shisvi.